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Tuesday, 10 June 2014

Jaylen's awesome description

We are practising writing descriptions in out independent writing groups at the moment. This is Jaylen's great description. I hope it inspires the blue writing group tomorrow.

The pinecone is big. It is like a road on the top. There is a web in the pinecone. I thought there wasa s pider. I thought the spider was in the web because it is dark in the pinecone.

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